Professor Jacques A. Bailly
Classics Dept.
481 Main St., Room 300
656-0993
jacques.bailly@uvm.edu
Office Hours:
If you have a schedule conflict with those hours, please email me
with a couple suggested times and I'll let you know if I can make
one of them as soon as I can.
This official syllabus is posted on the web at:
http://www.uvm.edu/~jbailly/courses/161plato
The schedule may change: if it does, students will be notified in
class and by email. Be sure to update your browser often to make
sure you are using the current syllabus.
Texts: Plato: Complete Works, published by Hackett Publishing,
edited by John Cooper, is the best translation I can find, and I
would like you to use it. You may use other translations, but they
must have the marginal Stephanus pages, so that you can locate
passages we refer to in class. You'll have to order it online.
Substance of this class: We will read Plato for his
philosophy primarily: even where modern philosophy has moved beyond
Plato, we find him a wonderful companion to think with and through.
Plato is also one of the great prose writers, and so we will try not
to neglect literary aspects, especially as they relate to the
philosophical. What is more, Plato is a primary source for ancient
history and culture, and so that will receive some attention as
well.
This course fulfills
the following requirements: AH2: Humanities
The humanities involve
the study of past and present human thought about the way the
world works and how people should behave, exploring big
questions with which human cultures have grappled for centuries.The study of the
humanities helps students to understand what it means to be
human and how the past has shaped the present, building skills
in using primary source evidence to construct rational
arguments, and expanding capacity to empathize with other
people.
Grades: 91-100%=A, 81-90%=B,
71-80%=C, 61-70%=D, 60% or lower fails. Plus and minus will be given
for the top three and bottom three points of each range
respectively.
Graded Elements of this Course
Platonic dialogue alternative
paths
15%
Written Summary and Oral
Presentation of articles
15%
Argument Analyses
50%
Final
10%
Daily Comments
10%
Attendance: discussion and
continuity are essential to this class, and you are part of that.
Those who engage continuously with material tend to be more
satisfied with the experience from their own perspectives and learn
better from outside perspectives. So you have to attend and engage.
If you have to miss class, let me know as soon as possible: if it is
before the absence, I will be as accommodating as I can be. If it is
afterward, I hope there was no way to notify the class in advance. I allow you to miss three daily comments and one argument
analysis without penalty. Save those for when you need them.
If you know ahead of time that you will miss more than three
classes, you will have to come talk to me as soon as you know that.
Procedure:
The classes will ordinarily proceed as follows.
Before class: you read the Plato reading for the week.
Reading it twice is highly recommended: Plato has not
survived for so long because he is easy. He rewards and requires
re-reading. Also, please mark up your texts with
high-lighting, written comments, questions, etc. Making a text
your own is a good practice. Do not make the mistake of selling
your textbook back immediately: you signed up for Plato for some
reason and you are about to invest months in it, but we will, in
the grand scheme of things, read only a portion of the book. I
hope you will read more of it later and or re-read what we
cover. You should keep the book.
Argument analyses: we discuss the passages and how to analyze
them.
Lecture and discussion: in the remaining time, your fellow
students will present articles or I will. What I say is usually
based on secondary readings (which are indicated on the schedule
and you may read as well: this is a good idea, but not
required). I am most happy if the class turns into a good
discussion. I am also happy to talk myself, far too much. I am
extremely happy if the discussion includes many people and not
always the same people.
The material from the class presentations will be on the
final: you need to take notes so that you understand the notes
that will be provided online. You may also go read the articles
yourselves.
IMPORTANT NOTES ABOUT WRITTEN WORK: Experience has taught me
to be explicit about these things and to put them in the
syllabus.
Use non-sexist language. Plato talks about "men," because he
lived in an almost uniformly sexist world and was himself
sexist, but you should talk about "people" and "humans."
Related to this, it used to be just wrong to write something
like "When one reads Plato, they should be
aware that they are reading a translation." It is now,
in this class, correct.
Be careful about grammar: you can use grammatically
correct non-sexist language.
If an assignment is to be printed, printing problems are
not an excuse: try telling your boss that you missed a
deadline because you didn't plan well enough to get the document
printed in time. Just once would be too much. Don't go to the
library to print it right before class. Plan.
Deadlines are firm.
If you are having a time-crunch problem, let me know by email
AHEAD OF TIME. The day of is too late for an extension.
Telling me the day after is just plain disrespectful and a
horrible habit to be in. I understand full well that sometimes
there is too much to do, and I will be flexible IF you foresee
it and responsibly address it. That is one of those "soft
skills" people talk about and will serve anyone well.
Late work is simply not accepted. You can simply have that
argument analysis be the one that is dropped or do another
presentation.
ALWAYSkeep copies of your work, both a hard
copy and an electronic copy.
EXPLANATION OF THE TYPES OF
ASSIGNMENT IN THIS CLASS:
Comments: You will ask a question or make a comment about
the class material between classes. The question or comment should
be a thoughtful one that you genuinely want to know the answer to.
They are due the night before class (I will come along and empty the
document out early the next morning).
Anything you consider important will do. Trivial notes ("I was in
class," "Can't think of anything to say," etc.) will not count. If
you are truly at a loss for what to write, summarize just about
anything that was discussed or in a lecture. It doesn't have to be
profound, just honest, engaged, and real.
You should know that I will not have time to respond to these,
except piecemeal: I will read them to get an idea of how the class
is going, what your concerns are, whether the material is working,
etc. At the end of the semester, I will count up how many each of
you handed in. If you hand in all but three of the possible
comments, you will receive 100% credit for comments.
Argument Analysis RUBRIC
USED BY BAILLY
Every week of this semester after week 2, you will be asked to
analyze a small part of the Plato text assigned to the class.
This is called an "Argument Analysis."
The aim of this exercise is:
To extract the argument from a passage
To put that argument into your own words
To construct an argument that works logically
To identify key assumptions that are necessary for the
argument to work
To assess any faults or problems with the argument
The format:
Argument Analyses must be typed up, submitted, AND saved as
a file somewhere: I may ask you for another copy and you
should be able to provide it.
Arguments should be presented in steps, much like the
following trivial argument:
Every Seuqcaj wears a vest. (Bailly Lecture
4/20/1893)
Every Ylliab is a Seuqcaj. (Bailly
Lecture 4/20/1893)
Therefore, by 1 and 2, every Ylliab wears a vest. (Bailly
Lecture 4/20/1893)
A. The argument assumes that there are Seuqcaj's as
well as Ylliab's (or does it? if there are no
Seuqcaj's, isn't it still true that every one wears a
vest, but also that every one does not wear a vest?)
B. The Structure of the argument is a simple
syllogism.
Note that each step is numbered/bulleted, and the first
two are the evidence/reasons for the third. That is why the
third refers to the first two by number.
Evidence/reasons/premises must precede the conclusion. Also
note that where you got each claim is put in parentheses,
using Stephanus page, letter, and line number) The lettered
points are meta-observations about the structure of the
argument and about the content, added to help explain what
the argument is. Rather than form a part of the argument,
they comment upon the argument.
While there is no indentation in this simple
example, indentation is a very powerful tool to indicate
subordination. Use it if it helps you.
Sometimes, it will be difficult or impossible to make the
argument strictly logical: do your best. There is always
some sort of structure to Plato's text, even if you don't
think it is logically valid or sound. Make the structure
clear.
You are free to be innovative and to play with various
ways to make your analysis clearer or better.
NOTE WELL: please give the stephanus page
and letter and line numbers for every step of the
argument.
This sort of thing is always a good idea:
leave your reader a breadcrumb trail to find the
evidence and source of what you say. I need this in
order to understand and evaluate your work better, and
you need it to think better and more carefully and
accurately.
We will see many such arguments: observe various ways to do
them and think about them and you will do better and better on
subsequent assignments. Those of you who have taken logic
classes should try to use it here and will be able to help us
all out, I hope.
These assignments are never to be longer than 300 words.Yes,
I will mark it down/ignore whatever is longer than 300 words:
being concise is a valuable and essential skill, among the most
important writing skills.
Timeline for Argument Analysis assignments:
This is a somewhat complex assignment, but the pattern will
occur repeatedly, so it should not be a problem.
On the day the argument analysis is due: bring 3 copies of
your argument analysis to class. Exchange argument analyses
with 2 fellow students.
Read your fellow student's argument analysis.
Give me one copy and give the others to two fellow students.
Consider what we said in class and what your fellow student
did, and use that to FULLY revise your argument analysis.
The class session AFTER the argument analysis was due: hand
in a copy of your revised argument analysis on blackboard.
Bringing copies of your draft analysis to class is worth 10%
of the grade for these argument analyses: I will simply count
the pile of draft analyses I have for you.
There will be several of these Argument Analyses: If you miss
one, it will not hurt your grade. If you miss two, it will hurt,
because it will be a zero. Do not miss one lightly: you may
really need it later.
Grading rubric: not all of
your argument analyses will be graded, but you won't know
which ones will be graded until later in the semester: this
is my way of dealing with the workload problem of assigning
writing in a large-ish class. Basically only 2 or
three will be graded with the rubric, and the rest will
count as exercises: if you complete them, you get credit.
Writing is thinking, and thinking benefits from repetition.
So does writing. If you are not rethinking and rewriting,
you are doing it wrong.
I encourage you to use the writing center and your peers to
hone these analyses. They are short assignmnets, but quite
difficult in spite of and because of that.
Article Summaries and
Presentations:
Scholarly articles/book chapters are the basis of my lectures
and your presentations.
For each article we cover, two (or more) students will write a
summary and present that article's contents to the class.
These articles are assigned because they cover important
aspects of Plato's thought. They are not easy. They are
cutting-edge contributions about current concerns by top
scholars.
It is HIGHLY recommended that you come talk to me about the
article.
You must get a hold of and read the article well ahead of time
and set up a meeting with me if needed to make sure you
understand the basics of the article you choose.
The articles will be assigned in the third week of the
semester.
You may choose an article and partners if you do so before the
3rd week of the semester: after that, it may be possible for you
to 'horse-trade' with each other should you find you need to
switch somehow, but there are no guarantees.
Part of this assignment is an individual written assignment,
called an "article summary."
An article summary should be no more than 3 pages long. That
means you have to pack material in tightly and use your words
carefully.
You can use bullet points instead of paragraphs.
NOTE WELL: I grade wordiness harshly: you need to pack in
material by using as few words to express your ideas as
possible, but still express them well.
A good summary does the following:
State the most important conclusions/message/claim/result
of the article, which can be rephrased as stating what the
article is trying to do, what gap in previous knowledge it
is filling, what material it is surveying, or what it is
correcting. In other words, it answers the question,
what task does the article accomplish?
This should be done with a sentence or a paragraph right
at the start of your summary.
Give a clear idea of how the article is structured by
indicating:
What each section of the article covers
In what order the article proceeds and why in that
order
Use very brief remarks about what order the
article follows and why it does that, to show your
reader how the article is structured. Do it as you
go along, but clearly, by using wording like "The
first (of 3) section, about recollection, says
that..." and then "Recollection leads to the argument
for immortality (section 2), which starts from
the claim that ...." etc.
Give the most important details about the article's
content (note that this requires judgement: choose the most
important parts and do them well and in detail). Rehash the
basic arguments and evidence for the conclusions if the
article is arguing for a particular position. Summarize the
most important content if the article is a survey. This
is the biggest part of the summary: it is the
justification of the conclusions.
The idea is to reproduce the article's most important
claims, arguments, and content, and to give the evidence for
those claims.
Put the ideas into your own words and phrases.
Please DO NOT QUOTE verbatim from the article, except for
short phrases or at most a sentence. 95% of this summary
should be your own words.
This is not an assignment that can be successfully completed
the night before it is due: a good summary will have gone
through much editing and careful thought and include
discussion with me and with your partner(s).
IDEAL Timeline: times
are somewhat flexible: mandatory steps and mandatory times are
boldfaced.
2 weeks ahead: read article. Underlining,
note-taking, and outlining as you read should help: make it
your own.
10 days ahead: write initial draft of your 'summary.'
This draft should be significantly longer than 3 pages.
9 days ahead: whittle it down. Condense and analyze
what is most important in the article. Have a friend read it
and comment.
8 days ahead: re-edit, bringing it close to a final
draft.
7 days ahead: proofread, read it aloud to yourself to
make sure it flows well, have a friend read it and comment.
7 days ahead: e-mail
your summary with the subject "Article Summary DRAFT" to
me.This step must be completed before you schedule
and meet with me and probably also before you meet with
your partner. The
e-mail subject line must be "Article Summary" so that I
know what to do with it: otherwise it may get lost and you
will not get credit. This summary must be at least 3 pages long.
7 days ahead: email the other students who summarized
the same article and set up a time to meet and divide the
task of presenting the article.
6-5 days ahead: meet with your fellow students and
discuss the article as well as divide up the task of
presenting the article.
There are at least two tasks involved: the oral
presentation and the creation of a visual aid or handout
(i.e. notes for the class and yourselves).
I do not have any particular format or division of
labor in mind, as long as you are all satisfied that you
are each treated fairly and treat the others fairly.
By this time, I may have re-read the article and have
it present in my mind, so you are welcome to meet with me if
you desire to clear up any questions. Before this time, we
can meet, of course, but I may not have the article's
contents ready in my mind.
2-4 days ahead: a full rehearsal of the
presentation straight through without interruption,
including on-line notes for the presentation.
Do not commit the common error of assuming that
your audience has read the text and can read what you put
in front of them: you should present the whole argument
from start to finish as if they have not read it at all
(remember that there is a good chance some of them have
not yet completed the reading assignment). You are there
to be a guide, and guides need to go over everything
confidently and completely as (if) their audience wants to
hear what they say. You should plan for your entire
presentation to take no more than 20 minutes if it is
uninterrupted (which it will not be: the best presenters
will provoke and manage discussion well).
At least one day before presentation: make sure that
the on-line notes will be available in the classroom. We can
access the web as well as your e-mail from the classroom,
but do not assume that the computer there has anything but
an internet browser and old and basic software. Do not risk
arriving at class and not having your visual aid working.
Come try it out well beforehand.
Day of presentation:
each person brings a hard copy of his or her own
individual summary to class to hand in to me. This
hard copy should be at most3 pages and
should be a revision of the one you e-mailed me earlier. I
must have the e-mailed version a week earlier for this
summary to count.
You will present these articles in pairs, and you will have a
handout or online notes/visual aid that you create. Your
summary, however, is done as an individual. Your grade is based
on the summary and the handout you prepare for the presentation.
Your grade is not based on the presentation itself. I'd like to
think it will work best to divide up the presentation roughly
evenly, but I don't mind how you do it.
You may pre-record your presentation if you don't
want to perform live: this has great advantages in that you
can re-do it easily, etc.
ALTERNATIVE PATH ASSIGNMENT:
3 page (750 words) philosophical dialogue branching off from a
specific point specified with Stephanus page, letter, and line
number: this point is of your choosing in one of the dialogues
we have read so far, but your dialogue must continue from that
point with the same characters and same topics.
It must contain philosophical argument and must be
continuous and consistent with the dialogue before the point
where it starts.
You are encouraged, however, to go out on a limb, to
challenge Socrates, etc.
What I will be looking for in this assignment:
1. 10% Your starting point: The specific point in a Platonic
dialogue from which you start. Give the name of the dialogue,
the Stephanus page, the letter, and the line number. This
should be an easy 10%
2. 10% Continuity: you should pick up from your starting
point and take the dialogue in a different direction than
where the text goes, but do it seamlessly, as if Plato had
written your words. The ideas, the characters, all should be
plausibly continuous. A relatively easy 10%
3. 40% Ideas: you should insert interesting, important, and
plausible ideas into the stream of the dialogue.
10% The presence of your ideas is one important factor.
15% That your ideas fit well at that point is another.
15% That your ideas are clear/well formulated is another.
4. 40% Argument: you should have the character(s) argue
for those ideas, say why they must be right.
20% claims and conclusions are clearly present.
20% they work really well.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED: use very brief footnotes for
meta-comments to explain what you are doing, how it meets the
criteria above, etc. You can use your own voice. These
footnotes do not count toward the 750 word limit.
NOTE: sometimes less is more:laying out a modest agenda with
good argument that really works will impress me a lot more
than trying to do too much and not doing it well.
Final:
Final will have some or all of the following:
Factual matters: These are things like the birth and death
dates of Plato and Socrates, the titles of the works of Plato,
who the characters are in the works of Plato, why he is named
Plato, etc. In other words, these are things that have right and
wrong answers that you either know or you do not know and cannot
be argued about. You will be supplied with a list of them, which
you should learn as forever knowledge.
Short answer ID's: you supply a few sentences about a concept
from Plato's text or our lectures/discussions, enough to explain
it and show off your understanding.
Text ID's: a passage from Plato for you to identify and
analyze (what dialogue? what's it about? why is it important?
etc.).
Essay question(s), perhaps.
It will never cease to amaze me, but once in a while, a student
just plain misses an exam or skips an assignment altogether, then
emails me or shows up and asks when they can make it up, or
doesn't even acknowledge it. "That's just not allowed," is all I
can say. Basically, you get a zero, and that pretty much drops you
into the submergent grading zone for the semester. Don't go there.
I'm saying this now, because every once in a while, that student
who missed the exam gets stroppity about what it says on the
syllabus (this shouldn't have to be on a syllabus). Basically,
"Don't make your problem my problem."
Human Concern For You and Your Fellow Students:
College is often a high-stress, confusing, and even dangerous
experience. Not just college. Life is. If you see someone whom you
suspect is in a place where help is needed, don't hesitate to let me
know. I can and will find someone who can try to help them in a
constructive, non-punitive, non-blaming way. Myself, I am just not
equipped to help in most cases, but I know folks who are and I know
how to get help where it is needed. I am talking about things like
depression, suicide, violence, self-destructive behavior, drugs,
alcohol, abuse, crime, assault, etc. While I have no interest in and
you probably should not tell me about irresponsible escapades, I do
want to know if there is a need for help. Don't regret not saying
something afterwards.
This Class and Your Future Literature, philosophy, history, and human thought in general
should play a strong role in the rest of your life, and your time in
college should plant seeds that grow into lifelong interests and
passions. But occasionally, students want to know about jobs,
careers, and such. I'm an academic, and I believe that a class like
mine should never stoop to usefulness: there are much, much more
important and lofty goals, having to do with meaningfulness, truth,
beauty, progress, figuring things out, human fulfilment, wonder at
our world, etc. And yet, I am told that the skills one gains in the
humanities are essential and important in the workplace, so much so
that you are as likely to be successful in a career with a liberal
arts background as others, more likely in many ways. I urge you to
go to the Career Center and avail yourselves of their
resources. They won't do it for you, but they will support you,
coach you, point out opportunities, and help you as much as they can
to successfully navigate the passage from your sojourn in the groves
of academe to the land of salaries and billable hours.
An Excerpt from a memo sent
out by former-President Fogel (which sounds to me like Socrates'
message to Athens), adapted slightly:
Students: Set the bar high for yourselves by resolving to be
actively engaged in the process of your own educations.
Faculty: Meet students’ expectations of academic challenge,
intellectual excitement, and a University community that is
genuinely caring and dedicated to student success.
Rededicate yourselves to helping our students thrive and learn. We
call on faculty colleagues for academic rigor and a profound
commitment to students’ intellectual development.
From a UVM alumnus: Education is not preparation for life; education is life
itself.
(John Dewey, UVM 1879)